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Internal Character Progression. The Agent accepts the cause of murder is to save the planet from monsters. The Nurse accepts the MC as trustworthy through her experience with them. Untrusting to Trusting. Unaccepting to Accepting. The MC has flaws as in losing rationality when touched by someone he finds attractive or breaking contracts cause of anger of his ally being knocked unconscious by his ally's ex wife new husband. Or even when it came to needlessly taking out a child with 1 point. The farming guy and planning guy both progress as well. Planning guy starts in his desire to find a weakness in the ... MC(father) then is romanced once the MC revealed through action his active progression toward saving the world, which he fully feels postiive toward the MC. The planning guy, full on negative toward the MC. Less clear progression moreso fear after MC threatened him for cutting him off - which he doesn't state his negativity toward MC which is progression. To sum that up, he is aware when he loses rationality and reels his rationality back through external (sometimes internal) forces like contracts or his friends. All allies progress caused by MC's revealing through actions his positive goal in effect feeling positive toward MC.

The art is clear. The MC's goal is stated early, and he's never inactive. The tension is there from start to finish, but its towards his allies rather then himself. Interaction between side characters reveals their beliefs. Side characters (dad,tiger) being transitioned to in the middle of MC's scenes were speeding the story events speed, and was timed right as they're, about to be and in the future in the same setting(city) or crossing paths.

The characters appearance (agent and mc) were unclear as in distinction - not a knockout punch for the series though. The cast members in the settings gave the sense of human, especially pre-death.

The MC came to accept blood a little too fast, though contrasting beliefs of his actions majorly came externally rather than interally. He gave persuading reasons, which works since as the agent said "we're only alive because of his decisiveness as a trait" - so this just reveals his character.

The interaction between cast members as in people with powers were good to restate how everyone fears the MC. The sweat visuals do as well.

The story goal, to save the world. The dillema is, end all but 200 people in the world or be ended. The story's lesson is negatively affect the majority of people is needed for the living to progress. Another story lesson is, humans hug the powerful when powerless. Your desire to being unspared doesnt cause you to be unspared, it's your power/skill sets for the powerful.

The future interaction between MC and his father, and MC and the woman that left were unfortunate cliffhangers.

The action was decent. For a story that MC has to survive with combat - reading and adapting to opponents and new skills being used not occuring, causes a point loss.

In sum, the story has internal character progression, vital and distinct characters, story lessons, clear goal, moral dillemas and clear art. Great Recommendation .

be willing to reflect on your actions, in effect meaningfully apologize. this is the standout story lesson. a list of others i picked up on: everyone desire is to survive, they'll betray you in effect. the most positive people externally are the most negative internally. how you react under stress indirectly causes negative events and feelings. one persuasive reason causes anyone to do negative actions, like religion or their own trauma. negative experiences rids beliefs. Greed causes the most rational thinkers to get caught. Humans target weakness. Friends are worth more than money. Know Intentions before you react negatively to someones negative actions. ...

The tension and conflict between the cast stays start to finish. The cast are all distinct, internally and externally. The art is clear. The story lessons are shown and stated clearly. Foreshadows of betrayals are clear. The betrayed and betrayer dynamic is constant from start to finish and is unique and used through multiple cast members.

I liked the christans the most. The male was using her religious delusion to kill a person and dog, and she believed she was doing it for divine favors - but he actually was benefitting from it. Same belief, but the reason why was different. The MC wasn't very active in the later chapters toward his goal, and the FMC even called him out for going with the flow. The story did no justice in the trope of "active MC" as he still won regardless. The plot armour as well, with no long term injuries to him - even emotionally as he went to the external world he acted normal. The effect of this negative experience wasn't shown in that regard, but the lesson is clear nonetheless. He was very good in processing the betrayal of the murderer and the accomplice, though he still cared about the two in the end which goes against what reaction betrayal gives people.

Moving on to the lawyer, The upward showing of the lawyer being one of the accomplices was well done. His death in effect highlighted the theme of greed causing downfall, in this case was being betrayed by the murderer - was awesome. unlike the MC who had plot armour after being betrayed, and didnt hurt nor get hurt after or before the betrayal or during the entire series.

Nonetheless, its a 10/10 due to the fact its story lessons are clear and shown throughout - which multiple story lessons that are clear and repeated shows the author had a reason to create the story unlike all the other comics I read.

No Tension. No Clear Antagonist. No Clear Story Lesson.
Nobody holds a candle to him, whether he pretends post-fight that he was hiding his struggle during the fight. Everything is handed to him without any difficulty. For example, first princess as a twist, yet soon after we find out she was more useful than who he planned to capture. Another example, the scamming store clerk gave him a fake potion so he went to another shop to get a real potion and ended up having the scammer work for him. More examples: Allies give up on betrayal, nobody questions his real identity when in disguise, ... enemies nonthreatening.

Clear goal and art nonetheless, which are the standout positives.

Characters backstories have a reason to root for their success, they aren't flat.

There are distinct character personas. The MC's hypervenlating due to his inferiority to his opponents, midget crazed over his inventions. Second in command and elf stressed about mc's choices then understanding it.

there are clear chararacter progressions.
second princess hating being captured to having a goal to beat the MC while being trained by the second in command.
hero wanting to kill mc to then accepting his fate on the condition he doesn't reveal he found the tower simtameously keeping his popular reputation that he desires.
first princess scared to ask for items to then approaching him for items.

It's just a unmemorable and uncreative(but one of the few of its kind) story. The characters and goal are copy and pasted from every other isekai manga. I'll upscore it for not having any dungeons so far and replacing it with inside a volcano, as well as for being one of the few alternatives for ABOSLUTE PERSON IN EVERY CORNER. It's average, but because of those two points I made I have to give it a 6.

THAT ICE PRINCESS GOT POTENTIAL THOUGH.

Summary: No Tension, antagonist, story's lesson, unoriginal characters, goal and events. Distinct character appearances and progressions are visible.

No clear goal. No clear antagonist.

The last 3 chapters were the only "tension", which I define as not knowing if the MC or his party members would survive. Too little of those moments, in effect made fight results predictable. The harem route in the end was just fanservice to increase attention. The MC never showed romantic affection ever, just he touched her face and he became a different person for a couple pages. Afterward, numerous romantic jokes toward the MC was made. If there's a positive, the blue hair did increase confidence after their woo-hoo - but not noticeably. Very inconsistent and ineffective use ... of romance and character development.

The highlight of characters were the red hair (demon sword) and brown hair (energy shield?). Red hair remained cocky and weak, and upgraded in later chapters as stronger than brown hair. She consistently fought in the foreground since her upgrade. Here, a romantic option made sense. She expressed fear of him throwing her away, just like the blue hair girl - but the difference is she was actually weak. She locked herself in the room, cried and it made the MC very paranoid to the extent he would break in her room to check on her. the brown hair worrying about red hair's safety also was good character development. The competitive nature is a cause to their personalities, its a downscore to not show their training - as the cause is to upscore the other.

The lucky priest - a childish crybaby and her whole use of her power is un-needed healing and giving directions to the MC who already knows the directions. The spider girl had great potential. Not being conscious when she was there enemy and the blue hair struggling to accept her since she killed her sister, the progression was skipped and affected neither not one bit. Didn't make each other closer, neither showed actions of their attempts to trust eachother.

MC showed rage against past enemies, and loneliness when thinking of where his comrades are. He seeks to not make the same mistakes. his character development was removing his belief he knew everything about dungeons once it almost killed everyone. Events went too smooth for him though, this was only the last few chapters. He knew how to benefit from all interactions due intellegence or past interactions from his last life- for example with the shadow queen. To learn the story's lesson right before the story was axed is really underwhelming.

Shadow queen, not much to say about this one. Could've kept MC on his toes with tricks like she used to kiss him and steal his swords. Picking on people and sarcasm are the humorous elements to her personality.

The art multiplied later chapters, didn't change my attention though - It was clear enough from the beginning. It kept my attention, by default it's very good. The lack of tension and dynamic characters keeps it from being great.

Save/Load, solves the fake tension manga carries with MC's - he could die and he always does unexpectedly. This is the reason I give this a 10. Despite other people's opinion, if the image is clear It's a 10 - especially when in full color. The shipping choice and the betrayal is forced. No past events has hinted this outcome. His interactions were all the same, so no character stood out. His goals are detached, he could drop the system and he states his desire too many times but he doesnt just live normally. His inner monolouges and diolouges are flat. I will praise ... when he goes through his dillemas on if he should end his team for more lives and if he should start off with the basics and get rid of the system. This is the second strength of the series. The author forces removing the system though, as MC was 1 shotting the strongest in the murim very quickly close to the end. The trascendent is also forced, a chapter earlier is the first time this guy was mentioned - a strength level of 99.9b is way too vital to just only mention in the final chapters. A great character progression moment is the 1st to admit he needs assistance killing the MC, his whole personality contrasts this action. Afterward, assisting the MC to warn him he's fighting the wrong battle - this refers to what I said about hinting a 99.9b boss in the end game. 10/10 due to the save load solution. What's next is unexpected as well.

No Antagonist Giving Character Tension. MC became intellgent through wars as a child Not regression, which is why I stuck with this unique character due unique backstory. After long, the conflicts were onesided and predictably the MC would win. Presumably, handicaps on genius MC's will happen, but it didn't - and later on I bet it will be. Either the men are all jealous of his skills or how he recieves women attention. The women either are obsessed with him(eq.approach for phone number) or a strong likeness toward him. All antagonistic women stopped after he heroically saves someone. The last thing this story needs is ... more allies. The art style improved without me knowing as the plot kept my attention. The characters all develop, for example many side characters admit their likeness and drop their untold investagations on him after he did something they like - and may admit they admire him. The feMC gives up fighting a political marriage but gains courage after seeing MC will guard her life. This is all well. The most improtant thing that can't be understated, is the lack of MC for the goal. I stuck with it, because the short term goal of bodyguarding to afford his sister a gift. This went nowhere, and I'm done not having a reason to root for him. I'm sure the antagonist that disappeared early in the story will emerge but he's not having current affects on the story. It's a fine story, just unfocused.

The character progression is developing very slowly. He states he wants to make it a goal to have his qi as strong as it was his prior life - yet doesn't make it a focus. Even after he states that a fodder requires his full stength. The story started with him saving a patient, and even failed at saving a cancer patient - so you'll think him focusing on saving patients supernatually would be the plot. At this point, he's doing ventures like pizzamaking, working at his parents cafe, movie acting. At this point, his main goal of returning to his prior qi is going ... to come together in the late chapters - where I'm not going to see. The author made it a point that the military was going to make him more capable in martial arts against weapons - yet the only change was Gas immunity. Too much screentime in the military was him overpowering others and him gaining favor by saving others mishaps. Again, not using screentime to improve his capability against weapons is against MC's goal. This would add meaningful tension which is missing. The MC's best trait is seeking how to become more likable, and we see the changes in character progression. I'm guessing "co-exisistence" is the theme now - we're 63 chapters in and he's not in conflict to where he needs anyone. The art is good—especially when it shows how he looks when he uses his demon hallucinations.

The father said he didn't want children and the inspector disregards his wants. The npcs are side eying the inspector and THe inpector doesn't regard that as an unsafe environment for a child. The inspector gets a face touch from the mother, in effect he sees them fit for caretaking. The MC disregards parents beliefs, and the unwelcomeness of the environment and overlaps them with what he wants. This is based off the first story event - as after that event I couldn't stand anymore. The concept is straightfoward on if a system is capable of who is fit and unfit for caretaking.

He takes no steps to find out about the world and his powers unless someone else holds his hand. He isn't curious at all, and without the powers he recieves he's uncreative to win a fight. He's asking his chat information instead of figuring it out himself. I do like a MC who isn't scared to punch a human though... and the art is good for the eyes. Those are my only pros.

It was very predictable, the antagonist is being tased to sleep - he's no threat. The characters aren't really soulful, the dynamic between the chef and the restaurant manager was the closest ... thing to a realistic dynamic. MC didn't even react emotionally telling the manager of his death - as well as when he found his parents are in military custody. Everything is robotic.

No Antagonist or Tension. It's a great runner up of Medical Return with the regressor uses its workplace knowledge in the next life, but what it misses is an antagonist and tension. He's being spoonfed, and introduces a romance option before he deals with one twist. His mom already doesn't have to work anymore, within the first chapter he signed a contract for millions. Medical Return atleast earned his first shares and millions through copying from what someone else did in the pastlife. This one earned his millions through having "star potential" without an actual movie to prove he's capable. The one who are ... impressed are not skeptical enough. You have the writer giving him a position which is opposite of his life - which is hating his mom, just to test him. He didn't know he was that person in his past life so it was easy for him. What kind of tension is that - the author couldnt find something actually difficult? Medical Return had the MC poisoned from the jump from the antagonist - he might've not been smarter but he made sure his punches hurt. I dont like this.